Y2 Writing Task: Brum goes to the seaside
Hello Yellow Class! This week I’d like you to write a diary entry. You’ve done this before…
- We pretended to be The Lonely Beast taking a tour of Tottenham.
- We pretended to be Amelia Earhart on her journey around the world before she sadly died.
This time I want you to pretend to be Brum!
Brum is a children’s TV character from quite a long time ago. You need to watch the TV show and then write a diary pretending to be Brum, writing about everything that happened to him and everything he saw during the day.
LO: To write a diary entry about Brum’s day.
Success Criteria
I can write in the first person to pretend to be Brum. (I, my, we)
I can write in the past tense.
I can use time connectives (First, then, next, after that, soon, finally)
I can use interesting adjectives to describe nouns.
I also want you to try to use some of these conjunctions. Only use one in each sentence.
Here’s some more helpful hints…
helpful hints diary entry
Here’s a template for you to print out if you’d like to use it…
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Word mats for spelling!
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I will post some fun seaside activities on Thursday. Please try and complete this task by the end of the week.
Comments Challenge – Finish the sentence.
My favourite part of the video was…
10 Comments
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My favourite part of the video was when the dad fell into the hole and the little boy tried to bury him in sand.
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Hi.
My favourite part off the video was when Brum was playing tennis, with the tennis racket tide to his face.
Also when one off the kids dug the hole and dad fell in to the deep hole.
Very funny video?☺.
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Vihansa says:
Hi, it is a very funny video. My favourite part is when the tennis ball fell in the dad’s tea cup.
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Safiyyah says:
My favourite part is when Dad got stuck in the sand and the child said sorry Dad.
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Saule says:
My favorite part was when the dad fell in to the hole 🙂
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Nala says:
My favourite part of the video Was when Brum and everyone went to the seaside .
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NARIYAH says:
My favourite part of the video if when Brum found the twins,
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Adem says:
My favourite part was when the man was playing tennis with Brum and he fall down in the sand.
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Mr Morgan says:
Comment merits to Aaron, Vihansa, Safiyyah, Saule, Nala, Nariyah and Adem so far.
However I’ve not received many diary entries!
Please do your best to write the diary entry, pretending to be Brum, and email it to westgreen.yellowclass@gmail.com
My favourite part of the video was when the man in the deep sea divers costume drank tea through his snorkel.