The winner is….
Hello everyone.
Watch the video to see who is the winner of the Year 5/6 poetry competition this week.
Well done to all who entered. Patrick, Mr. Spours and I really enjoyed reading them all.
Look out for the next competition coming soon….
The winning poems are below. Enjoy.
Jenny
Silhouette of the Midnight Sky
A Midnight Sky
A bright full moon
That floats so high
Only to leave soon.
A swaying silhouette catches my attention
It’s crooked claws reaching out
A source of protection
For the shimmering sphere that stays without
A friend in the night.
Yet, that single tree, so lonely
Fills the void,
Between the midnight sky,
Moon and me.
THE BIG CLAP
It’s Thursday night,
It’s nearly Eight,
I really, really cannot wait,
With claps and cheers,
For all to hear,
Whether they are far or near,
I watch the clock,
We’re nearly there,
All the people stop and stare,
Into the street to see who’s there,
How many people show they care,
Who will start?
Will it be me?
Will it be them?
We will see.
It’s Thursday night,
And I can’t wait,
To show the NHS they’re great!!
23 Comments
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The people who didn’t win (Even me) i would just say don’t worry, there’s more competitions to win!
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Will Spours says:
Well done to all those that took part – they were all of a very high standard. Huge congrats to the winners, they just had something extra special about them!
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Allana says:
Thank you ?
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Adrian says:
Thank you for choosing me as a WINNER!! ???? It was a surprise to me because ??
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Thank you!
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Sophia says:
Good job Adrian.Reading it wanted me to grab a bag of popcorn and read it all.
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Thanks 😀
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Thank you!
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Patrick Creane says:
I believe it was very close between all of them Davmie. They were all very good!
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I hope it’s about writing whatever we want.For once I want to write a fantasy story that would be so long that everyone could enjoy every bit.
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Here is a joke.
Why did the director tell the actors to break a leg at the school play?
Because they needed a cast!Does anyone get it?
Congratulations guys- very well deserved! Well done to all the other fantastic poems as well!